its_friday_I'm in Love [8.4.17]

Ice cold sweet 

penetrating breach

suffering numbing teeth

bite in disbelief 

the kind of sort of neat

frozen, nearly petrified treat

kept from masquerading waste

my deposit of you not haste

a simply revitalizing hot day taste

i will take you this time

in my tongue's tiny cup



lightly tossing

Finding, warming your warmest heart

All along, until

I bit your burst 

with my softest bite

Lovely, longing 

frozen red grapes

DFTC 2017

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Comments (7)

  1. Munkyman

    August 04, 2017
    1. drivefaastakechances

      Ha! I don’t this I’ve heard this a handful of times! Funny!

      August 06, 2017
      1. Munkyman

        It’s one of my favorites.

        August 06, 2017
  2. funfreak

    I love this! It made me feel refreshed just reading it. I miss you, my friend.

    August 04, 2017
    1. drivefaastakechances

      I miss you, dear friend. Where would be without this “place”

      August 06, 2017
  3. scarlet_witch

    I was totally thinking of… grapes…I promise? I like it! 😊

    August 04, 2017
    1. drivefaastakechances

      Good. Lovely.

      August 06, 2017